Tuesday 28 November 2017

Unusual voting result this month four stories were given two votes each Sheila, Jenny and  Pat.
This is Sheila's story

   State of Shock

Mavis was in a STATE OF SHOCK.  It had just been on the radio that her child-hood heart throb had died.  She had loved David Cassidy all these years and now – bang – gone.  She made a cup of coffee and sat down in her favourite chair and started to think back.  She could see her old bedroom with all the posters of him on the walls.  Her school books had his name everywhere with hearts and an arrow through them and M loves D tucked into every space.  She wasn’t  alone, most girls in her class had this crush as well.  They thought that he was gorgeous looking and wished that they were his girlfriend but they had to be content with yearning from afar. 
When they were a bit older and were at work, Mavis and her best friend Jill actually went to one of his shows.  Afterwards, making their way home, they admitted to still having a crush on him, but actually hadn’t heard him singing much because they were screaming as much as all the others in the audience,  and they hardly had any voice left to prove it!  
As time  went by boys – or should I say young men – came along and eventually Mavis married James.  Jill was bridesmaid of course.  The day was perfect, even the weather behaved and the sun shone all day.  They had been saving hard and managed to buy a little 2 bedroomed house.  A very proud James carried his bride over the threshold.  They didn’t have much furniture, only the essentials, but they were very happy and looking forward to their married life.  A couple of years later, on the very day that Mavis found out she was pregnant, Jill asked her to be Matron-of-Honour at her wedding to Alan.  Mavis was delighted to accept, and after talking to James, decided not to tell Jill about her pregnancy because she didn’t want to take any shine away from Jill on the run-up to her wedding – which was only a couple of months away, and she could easily keep her secret for that long. 
A few days after Jill and Alan came back from their honeymoon they called in to see Mavis and James.  After talking about how the wedding went and showing photos of their honeymoon Jill suddenly said that she couldn’t wait any longer to tell them that she was pregnant, and they had been in a STATE OF SHOCK at first but now they were very happy about it and they wanted Mavis and Jim to be the first to know.  Mavis looked at Jill in amazement.  “That was my news for you” she told Jill.  They both stared at each other, started laughing and both started talking at once and hugged each other.  James looked at Alan, “Congratulations” he said shaking his hand,”I have some beer in the kitchen, lets leave the ladies to it shall we?”

                                                                  Sheila Benfield

State of Shock

In September 2001,1 was having my annual holiday in America. Each year my cousin Rosemary would use her time share to show me different places in America and this year started out being no different. We had already been upstate New York to a hotel in the Catskill Mountains. We had spent an excellent weekend celebrating my birthday in a country hotel featuring a very funny comedian. It was fun!

Now back in New Jersey with a few days to go shopping and do laundry etc. before setting off agaimthis time to Virginia Beach. We were having breakfast before going into New York City to do some shopping, we were watching the breakfast news when one viewer phoned in to say an airoplane had crashed into one of the twin towers. He thought it was one of the little planes carrying tourists, but when the TV cameras swung around we could see it was a much larger plane, and within minutes a second plane hit the other tower. We were watching this horrific event live! We sat in a state of shock. It really was horrendous and unbelievable. September 11th. A day America will never forget.

Had it happened a couple of hours later we would have been in the city.Of course the news was shown all over the world. I was unable to contact my family to let them know I was OK.Fortunately my daughter worked out that we wouldn't have been in the city as early as 9am. We were glued to the TV watching all the terrible events of 9/11 unfold. I can't believe its 16 years ago as the memories are so fresh.

We carried on with our trip to Virginia and enjoyed ourselves but the images wern't far from our minds. The people we met were extra kind and more tolerant than those I had met on other tripsy America had had a real shake up,

When I had to fly home the plane was half empty so I got a good upgrade. It would be a while before confidence in flying was back to normal.

It was strange when I arrived back in England and switched on my mobile I had several messages asking if I was alright. It was sort of eerie.
Jenny

State of Shock

It was a beautiful sunny morning and as Jane a finished her weekly shopping she decided to go for a walk around Gotee in Eling. It seemed as if all the dog walkers and families had the same idea. Coming down through the dark side of the old church graveyard, the bright sun hit her. How wonderful she thought shading her eyes. Strolling along she spotted a couple on a seat oblivious to the world. He had his arm around her back and tenderly kissed her temple. Then Jane's heart froze. It was Jim, her husband of 10 years.

That morning they had had a bit of a tif, nothing major, they had both wanted to do different things on their day off. Watching from behind a bush she noticed how tender he was being with her. Not recognising the red haired women she quickly replaced her steps and drove home.

Robert, their youngest would be waiting for her. In a state of total shock she tried to gather her thoughts. Carefully, driving along she picked up young Robert who was full of chatter. "Mum, did you hear what I said?". He asked. "Sorry dear, I was thinking about something else". "But this is important" he said " I won a prize for my story and I can't wait to tell Dad". With a great effort she flashed him a lovely smile.

Jim came home looking somber. Robert jumped on him spilling over with his news. Jane began to gather food from the fridge for dinner. A glass of wine was put into her hand and as they clinked glasses Jim said "Heres to the future". She forced a smile.


Later that evening, Jim said "Jane I have something to tell you". Here it comes she thought. " I saw my sister today and she has split from her husband". Jim looked sad as he quite liked his brother-in-law. "Oh Jim, I am so sorry she said bursting into tears." Guess what, she has dyed her hair red, I hardly recognised her". Jane silently said to herself "I will never jump to conclusions again". She couldn't tell him why she was so upset, and he concluded that his sister's problems had come as a shock to her as they had always seemed so happy.

Pat